Gosh, this page is pretty crowded. In hindsight this might have worked better as a two page spread. Ignoring some unfortunate tangents, F’nor’s sword arm is being obscured by Chain Guy in the foreground, which is a big no-no in my book. But since I’ve already planned future scenes in advance, changing this page into a spread will throw upcoming pages out of whack.

I will just redraw F’nor’s pose, and also make it into something more taichi-esque, as he is supposed to have a more martial arts style in his fighting.