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A Fantasy Webcomic

Book I. 72

Humbug Since Chris also wants to have a go at posting in the news area, I’m breaking out the avatars. Also, unless I’m directly referring to him, assume we’re talking separately. So where was I? Oh yes we’re back to the plot at hand.

Anyways the composition might look a little odd here with the figures pushed so far to the right. Generally it would look better if they were placed more to the left because of the Rule of Thirds, but then they would be too close to the fold of the spine. I also initially tried sticking the bubbles on the left half of the picture to balance it out a bit, but the extremely elongated tails bothered me, especially with Ari’s speech bubble.

So yea, sometimes compromises need to be made. :)

Chris It’s been a few weeks, but it seems our heroes have made it to the estate. Does anything seem a little… Odd, here?

6 Comments

  • SolidState | Posted July 21, 2014 at 8:43 pm | Permalink

    I dunno, it’s a little bit of a fixer upper but it looks like the house is still in good shape. :-)

  • wolfboy | Posted July 21, 2014 at 10:37 pm | Permalink

    Yeah, start at the buiding at the back of the grounds, (right side) and work your way forward. Should have it ready for renting as a bed and breakfast in about 5 years.

  • Miafillene | Posted July 23, 2014 at 9:18 am | Permalink

    Huh? Wha? Something was said? Can’t stop staring at Ari’s backside. It’s..hypnotic. @.@ Yeah I’m horrible. >.> And as a splash page of sorts, I like this compositionally.

    • Humbug | Posted July 23, 2014 at 9:22 am | Permalink

      She’s a good looking girl, who wouldn’t oogle her? XD

  • Binki | Posted July 23, 2014 at 1:55 pm | Permalink

    Mmm… Bottom.

  • wolfboy | Posted July 24, 2014 at 1:49 pm | Permalink

    Ah yes a man could die happy between those…….ahem, what was I saying…. oh yes, renovations

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